What a beautiful picture. I love the abnormal tilt to the picture. I found it very impactful. Some things that I think you did well with were the following. I enjoyed how you put bubbles in your scene for added emphasis and artistic collaboration! I also liked how you strewn the cards about around alice. I also admire your attention to detail. Her fingernails are appropriatley painted blue, she has a cute bow in her hair which matches the bows on her shoes. It appears that she is standing upright. Very beautiful. I didn't however like how there are leaves on the grass. I understand how this is an element that is beyond your control, but it takes away from the overall empahasis of your model and the cards. I would have also liked this picture to be closer up to alices face. I cannot see her features as well as I should and would like to have seen them. Perhaps another of your pictures could be of a head shot. alice could lie on the grass with her head as the most emphasized element of the picture. Thank you
The image is good.. the colours stand out and its well set out.. but if you were trying to create the image of falling, Im not picking it up to great.. The angle is good, but off slightly. Good work though, its well thought out and impressive nonetheless. <3 x
This is yet another lovely photo. The bubbles were captured perfectly. I love this angle. HOWEVER, The arms look a little strange to me. It may just be how she had her hands. But overall, i think it was done very well. It almost looks as though she's sliding off the earth.
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