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Keyhole Part II by kirawinter Keyhole Part II by kirawinter
Sorry, its took too much time to manage second part >_>
But, finally you can read whole story \^0^/

First of all, I must say that I wanted to try and make some photo-comics for a long time. And when some friend told me this story, I immediatly think: "this plot is really suited for this".

But it took another couple of mounth to find such beautiful people as Men Jia and Lan. Or it was a good luck, really xDDDD Both of them is very good in ordinary clothes and almost without make-up, which was my obligatory request.
After further cogitation I devide storyline into two parts, becouse I thought that it will be better than 16 different pages. But if you think otherwise, please tell me what should I do. It is my firsrt attempt to made something like this, so all critics will be appreciated!

Also I think I want to try more... I am fan of horror movies (btw, have you seen Insidious? Its really cool!) and games... And I already have one good creepy story xDDD If :icon35ryo: will agree play main character, you will see new story very soon ;)

So,

Aiko Lan (Aiko兰) as Zhi Yong
Men Jia (门夹) :iconmenjia: as Li Xin
Asahikawa Arashi as Wife :iconasahikawa-arashi:

All photography, editing, idea by me, :iconkirawinter:

Special thanks to :iconmonochromememory: for spelling checking

First part of story--->>>

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:iconyuki-k:
yuki-k Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Серьезно, очень жутко о_о меня так проняло...
Интересная история и фото чудесные *_*
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mangasockattack Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was great! Very spooky~
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locktheflow Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I've read this story as a creepypasta. I never knew you were the original author! That's so cool! :D
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:iconrubydasquirlz:
RubyDaSquirlz Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Writer
I was afraid this was gonna be that one Korean comic that activates itself while you scroll through it that gives you heart attacks...
Obviously this wasn't but it was creepy enough!!
Very well done!!

I want more of these. X3
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Singing-Wolf-12 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well.....forget sleeping for the next couple of days! -_-' I get scared way too easily...
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EMOPIGU101 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student General Artist
holy shit a massive shiver went down my spine when I realized what that 'red tape' was FUCK SO CREEPY but brilliant :D very original c:
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Raingrass Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013   Digital Artist
I really enjoyed your stories. Looking forward to next new story. ;)
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always-cosplay Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondeathstareplz: that was horrifying. I loved it.
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flowerpower138 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DDD:
i love it! :iconinloveplz:
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:iconginpachisenseii:
Ginpachisenseii Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
oh god.. <3
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LullaTheOtaku Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woah... didn't see that coming! great!
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Tataouin Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG the ending totally scared me! It was so creepy!!! x3 You are so good at telling horror stories! I wish to see more horror stories from you! :D
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woodenpen Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, I forgot to mention that her red eyes seem a bit bright. You can kinda tell you altered it with a program. Maybe make it a bit duller or change the layer type to burn?
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woodenpen Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude thats fucked up. Love it though :3
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oneisallallisone92 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
I grabbed my heart too! Great comic!
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:iconpisces-sayonara:
Pisces-sayonara Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhhhhh
I heard this ghost story a long time ago,
there's always something different ...

Scared me!! ):
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kissingdolls Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
It's from a hotel somewhere. ;D seen the story before but couldn't remember which hotel they say it was in. ~ <3 <3
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chibipandas Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my gosh! my friend told me another version of this a few years ago!! oh my gosh i was so freaked out!! but the cosplayers look amazing so it lessened a bit XD
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TheHugOfSungLi Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
wonderful :eager:
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angelofpurity15 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoa, so it was her looking out the keyhole at him. Creepy o_O
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darkwings16 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student General Artist
haha, i heard this story the other day^^ creeps me out every time, though^^; and seeing the red when i already knew what it was made it even creepier
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Eternally-Me Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
That sent chills down my spine when I saw her eyes. Awesome. Just. Awesome.
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:iconmomochan287:
Momochan287 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
Creepy but good!
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NatsuPi Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this freaks me out! good job!>w<b
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Meitalink Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2011
New story would be awesome~!

Very well done, all of you! You should make more these kind of stuff!
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His-little-wolfie Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Very creative and different way to tell a story. :) Great job
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artbynoni Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
This was beautifully done i take my hat off for u ^^
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DerCouch Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist
My heart literally shuddered when it said that her eyes were red. This was beautifully done, I applaud you.
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Distant-Devian Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
This is one of my favorite creepy pastas!! Wonderful job
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Silver786 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Student Writer
HUUU ;_; Creepy

But epic !
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YureiGloom Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
Wow, that's cool! I totally shivered in the end... And I came back to see the 'tape' then I... Gosh, it kind of scared me! The photo before the husband is dead is super cool! I loved the ilumination! The overflow of the story is great too. :D
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Lizalot Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
Ahhhh I know the variation of this story. :heart: Very well done!
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Marisabel-Janna Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011
Классная история!+-+ Жду новой истории=**
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iiUmexX Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
my best friend told me this story, but her version was of that he was on vacation in florida and he stayed in a motel. i like how you made it intense at the every beginning : D
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anime-overdrive101 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
that was awsome i loved it
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zukorules4ever Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so creepy.. that red tape was actually her eye :fear:
i wouldn't want to live there anymore..
btw, the story is epic win :D
i'm waiting for more :)
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Bahtun Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011
Niiiiiice,i got goosebumps :eyes: :D
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peacemaker2222222222 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011
oh i read a story like this but she looked through the peep hole :) but I scared now O.O
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RaspberryGrenade Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011
At first, I thought they were dolls! They have such perfect skin. <3 Ahhh<3
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KaulitzWolf Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011   Writer
...woah
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babylonianprince-3kp Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
I've heard this story before, though with different characters, but this one's probably one of the best :heart:
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Junsui-chan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
ah brilliant. ive heard the story before too ^^
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Chryseilas Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O. i literally jumped. T_T its was so scary~ but awesome :) >.> im gonna have nightmares.
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Chryseilas Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O
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eternaldays Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Student General Artist
OHH I remember my friend telling me this and she had to explain the 'red tape' was actually her red eye. LOL I'm surprised that you knew this story too o_o

*wipes sweat* I've never encountered key holes where I can actually peep through. XD I hope I'll never will encounter one. *shivers*
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Bella-ran Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Professional Artist
That is so scary! But so cool! XD
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ThatOneCommenter Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
Very creepy o_o Well done!
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LadyCeleste Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
more!!! I want to read more!!!

moe!!!^^
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starburn Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
Ooou, that gave me shivers! Oh my goodness...

I think I had stumbled across part one earlier, and it is awesome to now see the whole story! Augh. Shivers though. Oh my god.

Well done. INCREDIBLY done!
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cooliodude012 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011
wait... can you see through keyholes? e.e
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